Same here, but clearer text!

“Gently pulling it up”—are there any connectors? Do you have any pictures of this action happening?

Comment still needs attention. Add commas after introductory phrases (e.g., Using the screwdriver, unscrew).

This comment still needs attention.

I think you still need to focus on this comment—how to remove the ribbon cables, and a closer view of this procedure.

I might also add that the connector cable is connecting the battery to the motherboard.

Do you have a further out shot you can markup to show where on the device this is?

Note that iFixit prefers first-person shots to these kinds of side shots.

Do you have a picture of you separating the components? Also, make sure to write directions as commands.

Where is this component coming from?