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[* black] It took us ten steps, but we finally managed to penetrate the impenetrable.
-[* black] As an added bonus, the removed orange peel looks like a Slinky!
- [* black] '' Results may vary. Your orange peel may not actually look like a Slinky. Do not try to use peel as a Slinky. Do not try to use peel as any form of toy. Do not give peel to children. Consult a doctor if you feel that your orange peel is not Slinky-y enough. ''
+[* black] As an added bonus, the Orange comes with a free accessory, the Orange Peel—an amusing, Slinky-like contraption, guaranteed to deliver hours of fun.
+ [* black] ''Results may vary. Your Orange Peel may not actually look like a Slinky. Do not try to use Peel as a Slinky. Do not try to use Peel as any form of toy. Do not give Peel to children. Consult a doctor if you feel that your Orange Peel is not Slinky-y enough. ''